Brand voice and tone

Recommended style points

Concrete language. Metaphors and similes are great for creative writing, but for talking to prospective students, it鈥檚 best to be concrete rather than abstract.
Short sentences, spare words. Short, declarative sentences that avoid ornate prose or Latinate words are best for conveying precise messages to our target audiences. Long sentences with subordinate clauses are liable to lose our audience.
Active, rather than passive tense. For example, use 鈥淵ou鈥檒l have a wealth of opportunities for outside recreation,鈥� not 鈥淎 wealth of opportunities for outside recreation will be available to you.鈥� Active tense demonstrates a direct relationship between us and the students we are communicating with.
Personal voice, rather than institutional voice. We offer an intimate, tailored experience for the student that is based on personal contact and interaction. Therefore, our language should be personal, rather than institutional. For example, 鈥淲e鈥檙e here to help you get adjusted to college life,鈥� rather than 鈥淭he university has a wealth of resources available to help a student get adjusted to college life.鈥�